Comments of chapter undefined of Rise of the Devil's Soul
Rise of the Devil's Soul
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Hi I'm Lyra. I'm a new writer and wanted to check out some other up and coming isekais to get some inspiration. I like this alot. I will say the story would benefit from there not being an exposition dump via a storyteller/lecturer. Show don't tell you know?? The reader doesn't have to know everything at once. They can find out organically. I'll be reading the rest. Keep up the good work
Hey there! Thanks a bunch for checking out my novel and for the awesome feedback! I'm really glad you're enjoying the story so far. I totally get what you're saying about the whole exposition thing. I hear you loud and clear! đ But trust me, there's a whole lot more to uncover in this worldâtons of adventures, mysteries, and unexpected twists waiting just around the corner. While I did lay down some basics at the start, rest assured it's just scratching the surface. The plot runs deep, and I'm super excited for everyone to discover everything organically as the story unfolds. Hope you stick around for the ride! đ Thanks again for your support!
