Comments of chapter undefined of Persona: The Phantom Masquerade.

Once again, hopefully the transition from each segment isn't too jarring. That's honestly one of the hardest parts for me when writing. Moving from serious, to group, to emotional, to whatever. Kinda like with the last chap going from the Ann/Ren romance segment to Sojiro advice, to prep to calling card and making it smooth. Trying to work on improving it. For me, when writing it, I have very clear ideas as to what each segment looks like, but not the in-betweens, so I end up fumbling the execution slightly.

Great chapter as always the pacing feels more organic to me than the games since you dictate who you meet up and stuff in-game so stuff doesn’t always feel the best pace. This on the other hand is much better paced so keep it up.

Thanks for the chapter.

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the Chapter!

Im loving it Chief. Doing great

great chapter