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Comments of chapter undefined of Percy Jackson: Son of Hades - Prince of the Underworld

DaoistjcJwtW
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Si agregar monstruos en la mitología griega y también romana ya que a dioses romano en el mundo de Percy

raisin_man
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You could always bring in monsters from other pantheons if you want, as it fits with the world setting. Just have to find a reason why they would interact. Or yeah you could make some stuff up too, your call

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Lukas_Laurentino
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Well, Typhon is the father of monsters, the number of children he had was immense, and you can play God of War and transform them into a race like minotaurs, ogres, goblins, trolls, slimis, dragons, among others. , and even ghouls, vampires, werewolves, there are so many possibilities, you can put monsters from other worlds like chimera ants, you can do solo leving like all those monsters and dungeons, have imagination.

Sakra95
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Why not add some monsters from other mythologies like some native american monsters or others?

Danger321456
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I don’t mind have fun with it

SA_Queen
SA_QueenLv4SA_Queen

imagine him younger

Thoth0
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Yeah the Council of Cloven Elders really hated Grover.

Gerier
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Lordmoonlight
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I say make them the yes or no is confusing on the vote

Maizuky_Nichan
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Hum...

DaoistP9Biu9
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DiabloRedfox
DiabloRedfoxLv13DiabloRedfox

poor grover..

Eldesaparecido
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Conoces la serie de juegos monster hunter ? Cualquier monstruo es muy épico

DaoistjcJwtW
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Hojala que Thalia sobreviva ella tiene mucho talento ademas técnicamente hablando luciand es capaz de hacer lo que los dioses y mortales ven imposible el puede cambiar el destino de las personas????

Gerier
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Devils_and_angels
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grover prolly looks somethin like this

Aye_itz_cloudz
Aye_itz_cloudzLv13Aye_itz_cloudz

Thxs for the chap

Alfiemooon
AlfiemooonLv4Alfiemooon

I think the story is progressing too slowly. A lot of your character interactions are pretty meaningless atm which makes each chapter feel like filler. The conversations they have also feel really unrealistic. They don't talk how humans talk, it's probably the biggest flaw with this story. it also just feels like your dragging it out for no apparent reason. Lucian shouldn't feel as weak as he does rn either. He could of left a few summons for literally every fight while he and the others escape, and with the amount of money they should of had, they could of gotten to long Island really quickly. It rly should of only taken them 2 weeks at most while walking. A couple of hours by car. Don't drag things out to build suspence, it's honestly a really bad technique a lot of new writers think work. another big problem is the melodrama. instead of constant capital letters, which is honestly quiet jarring, you should show their emotions instead. Show and don't tell is something very much lacking in this story, and definitely the biggest flaw alongside poor character dialogue. lemme give you a quick example. "what are you doing here luke" The voice of Hermes shook the group from their musings. "it's far to dangerous for you, any of you" Hermes eyes glided over each demi-god, lingering on Lucian and Thalia before settling back on his son. Luke moved to speak, opening his mouth before clamming it shut again. Lucian noticed his closed fists, shaking. luke hesitated before opening his mouth again "I... we need your help. This is the only place I knew you'd pay attention to me" Those last words spat out with poorly hidden scorn. This is just a basic conversation that took me 2 minutes, but I think it gets the point across well enough. Drama that's more dramatic than it needs to be ruins all tension. Just be a bit more mindful.

RogueCrescent
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Thanks for the chapter

Sabaroth_zarkiel
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Thank you for the chapter