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Comments of chapter undefined of Strongest Superhuman System

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Strongest Superhuman System

Legioneer_1000

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Knightmares
KnightmaresLv4Knightmares

too much details getting in the way, 30 chapters in and every person that comes in gets a full chapter intro. the last chapter was all about a girl in a cave no fight, no new skill , just a chapter that could have been made a quarter of what it was

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Legioneer_1000
Legioneer_1000AuthorLegioneer_1000

Sorry you feel that way. I try to flesh out the story as much as possible to give you a more immersive experience. Please trust that anything I put into the story is important for it's progression.

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caleb_o
caleb_oLv15caleb_o

The nerdy lady had more sway than Fiona with Mark a lil funny

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