Comments of chapter undefined of Dc: start in Young Justice

what is this guy on about he literally can just catch omni man off guard by going invisible and even if omni man detects him he stil can't be touched and then he could just use X-ray vision with heat vision then lobotomized him to death

he can just use his telepathy invade omni-mans mind when he attacks and trick him he killed them fake their death. mc just doesn't want to save them

No harem, harem = drop

Is this going to be a harem or nah? Please make up your mind.

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Please have duplikate, atom eve, & monster girl/Amanda for harem.

thanks for the chapter but

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thank you for the awesome chapters and I hope you have a wonderful week

Good work so far. If I had to give any pointers the character is too passive other than copying abilities he hasn't taken much initiative, it feels like events just happen around him. Also if your gonna do harem just commit to the harem and have him go after the girls that interest him if you don't wanna do harem then do that. Having him be so wishy washy about the relationships he is in detracts from the story.

thanks for the chapter

thanks for the chapter

I am excited for the next chapter

this novel is like 60%-80% monologue....

thanks for the chapter

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Great chapter

Tftc