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Comments of chapter undefined of Dc: start in Young Justice

Rob2000
Rob2000Lv14Rob2000

Thanks for the chapter. Quick question: Will he be fixing the issues present in kid flash,match, and superboy with power manipulation to ensure that they are all at least maximum combat effective by the time he leaves.

Sushido099
Sushido099Lv2Sushido099

Could you have Zane steal or somehow copy the power of the other Superboy clone and give it to Connor so he has full powers without going crazy?

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Demons_Ki
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😈👌

omic
omicLv5omic

training scene was good i liked how his relationship with the team is growing

DaoistgZny4A
DaoistgZny4ALv1DaoistgZny4A

Does the mc know martial arts? 🤔

COFF33MANIAC
COFF33MANIACLv4COFF33MANIAC

Thanks

malinizgeldii
malinizgeldiiLv1malinizgeldii

Tftc

Anthony_Nguyen_0554
Anthony_Nguyen_0554Lv1Anthony_Nguyen_0554

I was hoping that miss martian can be with the Mc but no. Why do almost ever young justice fanfic writers write this they almost always not have miss martian be with the Mc of the fanfics they write. I hope it's not the whole I don't want to take my boy superboy's girl bs cause that just plan stupid if they want that than just watch the original young justice cartoon for that.

Aye_itz_cloudz
Aye_itz_cloudzLv14Aye_itz_cloudz

Thxs for the chap

OverlordBGs
OverlordBGsLv14OverlordBGs

Great chapter

Gurnoor_Singh_4533
Gurnoor_Singh_4533Lv3Gurnoor_Singh_4533

Author it is good 👍 . But Why is Mc spending time with kids and Helping for no reason ? He is supposed to be Neutral . Plz fix this .

Jackcannibal
JackcannibalLv15Jackcannibal

Nice 👍🏽

MercenaryRollen
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👍👍👍

Username48399
Username48399Lv14Username48399

Thanks for the chapter

Uncanny7
Uncanny7Lv4Uncanny7

I thought mc is neither a hero nor a villain. Why is he with the Justice League/Young Justice? Shouldn't he had left the CADMUS lab secretly without being discovered by any?

4bdu1
4bdu1Lv44bdu1

thnkx for the chapter

Carnic_321
Carnic_321Lv4Carnic_321

my ideas in the comment cause it’s long

Carnic_321
Carnic_321Lv4Carnic_321

tftc i would recommend finding ways to split your run on sentences into multiple sentences also if you aren’t already i would pop your writing in a Grammar Checker before posting it (i recommend Quillbot but that’s more personal preference)

Kami12
Kami12Lv6Kami12

Ty

Devyansh_Rupani
Devyansh_RupaniLv1Devyansh_Rupani

Thank you for the chapter