Stephanie_king1
Hey! I really like your story so I decided to use the coins I had left to read in advance. Just one thing though, I just feel like the last few chapterd have been a little long in the way that it was a lot of POVs which didn't give out crucial/exciting information and it feels like treading water a little. I just hope we finally get to the interesting things quickly. I don't mean to be rude and I know first-hand how protective an author can be over their work. I still love the story and Jasmine and Xayden are very interesting character. Just thought I'd give some honest feedback 🫶