Mel_Aniv
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Your pacing is way too fast. I understand that you might have some ideas that you want to put on paper but you gotta earn those.
Nooođ the tenses are all over the place, I love mimics please try using Grammarly, I use it in my fanfic, English is not my native language but as you can see it should still be readableđ
Wow, an interesting start. Didn't beat about the bush
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Hello I'm new here and I don't know how. Change the cover of my storyCan you help me