ChadLord
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Okay, I'm intrigued. So I'm just gonna read the chapters and let you cook.
Good start
At first It was okay but it starts to get too much at the end.
Nice start
Hey, interesting first chapter! How about we connect on Discord? It's a cool place to hang out and chat about your stories. Could you give me your Discord ID if you're up for it?
Is the annoying younger prodigious sister a trope nowadays? Anyway he doesn't have to give her 50$ anymore so voila
Thanks for chapter
It's a good idea to say "for the sake of the plot" when someone is bothering me in my novel ha ha ha ha ha ha
Congratulations vroyour writing style is really intriguing ,can't really wait to see your future chapter and the story plot