Connor_Ryals
The chapter is quite long and in some interactions you should add the moment when the MC goes from one point to another when there is a time passing because otherwise it gives the impression that you are in a hurry. And there's also the fact that it's small, its grimoire... Really small, I wonder if he would be the only one who can read it or if he will be forced to buy a magic tool would only allow other person to read lol. But apart from that, it's a good and long introduction, I wonder how will be the next chapter