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Comments of chapter undefined of Building a Business Empire with my Technological System

DeathLingers
DeathLingersLv13DeathLingers

well time to drop like any novel on here that requires passes and stuff

Mars
MarsLv6Mars

Nice chapter 👍🏼 finally the MC understand he doesn't need to rush.... he has a lot of ways to make money Also, maybe I missed it, but what is it in for him to bring the solar panel to the competition? About the car.... he should invent and build it himself

Shino_Franz
Shino_FranzLv2Shino_Franz

isn't it too early to locked the chapters?. it would've been better if it was the time he had already established his business.

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The_Ruler_001
The_Ruler_001Lv13The_Ruler_001

Keep up

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NovelDreamer
NovelDreamerLv14NovelDreamer

nice chapter

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TrueVoid45
TrueVoid45Lv14TrueVoid45

thanks for the chapter

DeathLingers
DeathLingersLv13DeathLingers

this gets worse by the way with the bs

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Isaac_mueller
Isaac_muellerLv15Isaac_mueller

love it all. keep it up.

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nexus
nexusLv14nexus

Nice chapter

ChoasD
ChoasDLv14ChoasD

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

Areck
AreckLv15Areck

Well, the ride stop there … Too many plot holes for my taste, and the human psychology is at best superficial. MC got mugged then act like nothing happened,no concept of his own security after that at all, MC got scammed by Charlotte and Co. then continue on his tutoring and speak to her like nothing happened (contract can easily be breached, even more with the bad faith the opposibg party revealed), even still want her as a business partner … MC always want to rush things for seemingly no reason. New tech built on old hardware, physically impossible. Shallow comprehension at best of the business side of the story, otherwise you wouldn’t go that route with the MC exposing his tech at the competition. He could legally be buried under so much legal paperwork that he would bankrupt his funds in lawyers fees: they have his prototype, nothing prevents them to say its theirs, no written proof anywhere. So it would never go well for him. There are more but i will stop here, i think i made my point already 🤷‍♂️ I generally like tech genre in novels, because im in the trade for 20+ years already, but there’s one thing you absolutely have to do when doing this type of writing : research. A lot of it, and inferences with multiple sources. Advising by knowledgeable people too can be good. Not doing that give the same look as those authors that write game like genre and screw up the stats and game logic and mechanics. To be fair, it looks like a rough inspiration from the popular tech system in Webnovel : Getting a tech system in modern days.

TheHisag
TheHisagLv15TheHisag

Thanks for the chapter