Comments of chapter undefined of Marvel: Bound to a power ring

good keep up

for me the story and plot progression is quite good.if you think a rewrite is needed to progress the story then do it.just don't drop the story I enjoyed reading your novel a lot and hoping for more.keep up the good work author

Хуйня какая-то не канонично и лучше бы гг либо парень либо фута в мире марвел/дс с система шаблонов.

No offense, but your story has just begun, there's a way you can improve your MC from now on... it's good that we see him maturing while reading this story

love the story keep up the great work