Comments of chapter undefined of Tycoon Actor in Hollywood

You can maybe put Lucas with Jeniffer as a couple that traverses hollywood together and fight to achieve stardom without breaking up, it isn't common but that is the beauty, make them like an early version of Tom Holland and Zendaya. it would be nice to see a couple triumph the curse of not lasting relationship of hollywood. and MC can help her with her acting by he himself inmerse in the roles she plays with (like when she acts in the hunger games he can rehearse with her of even play in the movie as Peta) it would be wholesome to see them together strive for stardom. you do you Author just a follower giving his opinion and wishes.

This story is really beautiful, a different structure from what usually happens with the protagonist who becomes a director. The power of Lucas' mind is interesting! The only flaw is the repetition of the same sentences a few paragraphs apart, sometimes the author repeats himself in an exasperating way and often adds words for no real reason. If he manages to improve this part, we are in front of one of the best fiction of the genre! I hope you can continue and improve, even if of course it seems easy to us readers... But when someone commits to writing, we should only be grateful.

Thanks for the chapter mc and Jennifer Lawrence has to be it

thanks for he chapter 😄

nice

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapther

tftc~~~○●

man I came here to read this novel after wrong chapters in other novels but gotta say this is awesome.. 5 stars from me