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Comments of chapter undefined of Tycoon Actor in Hollywood

RighteousDemon
RighteousDemonLv13RighteousDemon

Look, the writing itself is good, especially for webnovel, but there's nothing here. He's a failed actor and a waiter.....why are we supposed to believe he can get the role anymore than rando#4?He has no advantage and even has people hindering him. There's a reason why a main character is supposed to be special. Maybe you don't want to give him a system because it's overused but he needs something to set himself apart. Maybe when he reads a script he actually becomes the character for a while, or when he falls asleep the ghost of great actors/people coach,....something to justify why he succeeds.

Brazilianotaku
BrazilianotakuLv1Brazilianotaku

System or a good protagonist chose one

MIR_Devalanci:System isn't for weak writers. You can writer system and quality story at the same time. If you don't believe it then read Versatile superstar. It will change your mind.
OnlyGoodStuff_1
OnlyGoodStuff_1Lv13OnlyGoodStuff_1

icl in these kind of stories I Kind of wish we have a system or something to show the mc's progress as a reader i know hes a failed actor wich doesnt give me a lot of faith in him

KIING
KIINGLv14KIING

Who’s Myla?

Daoist737
Daoist737Lv3Daoist737

Who is myla?

Xiaoyunyun
XiaoyunyunLv2Xiaoyunyun

This is too indecisive that is for sure. First he wrote MC has a attractive features but average in American standard than again shows us this lady compliments MC saying he is exceptional charming and handsome. It's like those beginner authors with fixation with their MC being very average.

DORO_SAMA
DORO_SAMALv2DORO_SAMA

Thanks for the chapter

Insane_Fantasy
Insane_FantasyLv4Insane_Fantasy

tftc~~~○●