NewComer714
Look, the writing itself is good, especially for webnovel, but there's nothing here. He's a failed actor and a waiter.....why are we supposed to believe he can get the role anymore than rando#4?He has no advantage and even has people hindering him. There's a reason why a main character is supposed to be special. Maybe you don't want to give him a system because it's overused but he needs something to set himself apart. Maybe when he reads a script he actually becomes the character for a while, or when he falls asleep the ghost of great actors/people coach,....something to justify why he succeeds.
MIR_Devalanci:System isn't for weak writers. You can writer system and quality story at the same time. If you don't believe it then read Versatile superstar. It will change your mind.