Comments of chapter undefined of An Eldritch Demon's Odyssey

This is interesting, but if possible, you can make a second chapter (option) with a lot of descriptions and details. In general, it would be ideal if they told from the 1st person (doctors) how all this happens. As an example, I will give the complete process of removing an organ that led to physical weakening, in any case, I think everyone is interested to know exactly what was removed. And also, in my opinion, it is somewhat unnatural that the sweet was enough to calm down. After the experiments, this should have caused at least some additional destruction. Especially after the ones that hurt her. The minimum is probably to provoke a violation of the isolation of oneself and nearby SCP objects. You definitely need to add SCP 9602-2 objects representing all the cuties she created from Class D personnel and scientists during rampage. And it will be especially wonderful if there is an entire chapter devoted to how experiments were conducted with these SCP 9602-2. I don't feel sorry for them, so it's going to be fun. +++++ Это интересно, но, если возможно, можно сделать вторую главу (вариант) с большим количеством описаний и деталей. Вообще, было бы идеально, если бы они рассказали от 1-го лица (врачи), как все это происходит. В качестве примера я приведу полный процесс удаления органа, который привел к физическому ослаблению, в любом случае, я думаю, всем интересно знать, что именно было удалено. А также, на мой взгляд, несколько неестественно, что сладкого оказалось достаточно, чтобы успокоиться. После экспериментов это должно было вызвать, по крайней мере, некоторые дополнительные разрушения. Особенно после тех, которые причинили ей боль. Минимум, вероятно, состоит в том, чтобы спровоцировать нарушение изоляции себя и близлежащих объектов SCP. Вам определенно нужно добавить объекты SCP 9602-2, представляющие всех милашек, которых она создала из персонала класса D и ученых во время rampage. И будет особенно замечательно, если там будет целая глава, посвященная тому, как проводились эксперименты с этими SCP 9602-2. Мне их не жалко, так что это будет весело.

I think it might be a good idea is you have the MC interact with either Dr. Bright or Dr. Clef. I just think that their interaction would be hilarious.

Thanks for the chapter. I always like the ones where someone is talking about the MC. I would be interesting if we could get more different perspectives. Keep it up.

Blind people don’t see darkness, thanks for the chapter.

Thanks for the chapter , what would she say if ainz asked her about her lack of retaliation against the doctors and personal experimenting on her? Maybe she can say that she doubts that she was summoned by humans as she can feel shackled at all times by fate so she was probably summoned by some higher being and that being is the one responsible for her curse and blindness as ainz will probably try to cure her and fail this will set ainz and the rest in frenzy to try and find a cure for her and the supposed culprit

Good chapter, i liked it.

Thanks for the chap!

Thanks for chapter

Tftc!

thanks for the chapter

thnx for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter author-san!!