TeStoryHungryDemon
There's one thing that really bothers me is the pages that repeat themselves several times, especially at the beginning I feel like I'm going backwards and frankly it made me quickly check the whole thing to see how far it continues. I can't enjoy reading because of the extension that spoiled the pleasure of reading, no really I have to shorten it because it was simply aberrant, just with the first 5 pages the 6 gave me the impression of having entered a loop. Even in the original language there are more than 50 pages so half of the text is similar from beginning to end, even double by dint of reading in short it cut off my desire to read. You really need to fix the chapter because for the introduction like that in its current state. It hurts me just to see it, thank you for your understanding.