Entrail_JI
Dear author, I don't know if you will be reading this but I just wanna let you know of how much you have grown since writing TAPOV. In you first novel, the one word I will never forget is 'thereafter'. After reaching the 100s, the word was repeated like 20 whole times every single chapter. But right now, in your second novel, you have only used the word once. If that's not improvement, I don't know what is. Truly, what a splendid accomplishment.