Xand3r
The first thing would be that English is not my main language so when the writing is not very well structured I cannot understand it well (but that is not your problem, but mine). I think the biggest problem is the number of consecutive events that were thrown at us consecutively without us knowing anything about the plot, which makes everything very confusing.
Xand3r:What was confusing about the chapter? I would like feedback so I can fix it