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Comments of chapter undefined of Rogue's Ascendance

vasco_pereira
vasco_pereiraLv11vasco_pereira

I didn't understand a single thing about this chapter.

vasco_pereira
vasco_pereiraLv11vasco_pereira

The first thing would be that English is not my main language so when the writing is not very well structured I cannot understand it well (but that is not your problem, but mine). I think the biggest problem is the number of consecutive events that were thrown at us consecutively without us knowing anything about the plot, which makes everything very confusing.

Xand3r:What was confusing about the chapter? I would like feedback so I can fix it

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deadmandreaming
deadmandreamingLv13deadmandreaming

promising but work on the grammar a bit

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MAXandMILLS
MAXandMILLSLv3MAXandMILLS

this is not a captivating way to start, I hope i see better in the next chapters

NightGLE_WN
NightGLE_WNLv3NightGLE_WN

you havea a vey nice format as if I'm reading a lightnovel