Comments of chapter undefined of Calamity Upon This World
Calamity Upon This World
Okojus
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NovaEreLv4NovaEre
NovaEreLv4NovaEre
they don’t need to kill him just delay it 😭, + it’s not like only Dragons would be after him, plus I’m sure they have some strong loyal knights they could ask too follow him and make sure he don’t die or wtv
Okojus:why would someone strong enough to kill dragons work as a assasin?
tom_de_leeuw_8866Lv3tom_de_leeuw_8866
we have not yet build any sympathy or knowledge of character with the mc yet he does a time jump of 8 years right in the begining and make his behavior very eratic. and just give him power without showing how or how much he trains. also you suddenly introduce a bunch of characters that we have no knowledge of or can symphatise with since we don't have any idea of their personality. the story would be more readable if you made a bunch of small time jumps with the significant power ups and social events in between.
