Comments of chapter undefined of Greatest Of All Legends

all this bs of coming back on time for still let his family die i am out of here

I like to imagine that his second chance is due to his family.....maybe they watched him being in pain and leave his dream , so they asked ROB to give him a second even though they will not be with him again

Bro might actually be cooking

Hi author I hope you’re doing well, I just read the first and it’s really interesting. The grammar is good and even though is in 1st pov it’s well written. But I think that the tragedy that happened to his family is to much. I think that there is no point in enjoying life at the peak of football when his family in nowhere around him.

the history is fantastic 👌

I mean why kill the parents? If he couldn't even save his parents then what's the point of coming back again?

Thx

an amazing first chapter, the grammar is very good, im impressed. all i can say to you is keep striving to get better. there's no limit to how good one can be lets goo

Thanks for the chapter

thanks for the chapter

The synopsis got me here.

Good start .

thanks for the chapter

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