Comments of chapter undefined of Terra Nova Online : Rise Of The Strongest Player

Thanks for the Chapter 🍔📖🍟

I fear the S Rank Hate Reader may fail his quest today. I have no specific complaints about this chapter. It's short, I would feel annoyed if I had spent coins to unlock it, but it's free so it's fine. In a different MMO genre story, this would be a good introduction to the world of the game. The problems with the chapter relate more to what's been established by previous chapters of TNO. If this game, Terra Nova Online, is supposed to be a virtual representation of the alien planet Terra Nova, which is the destination of 1 billion refugees from Earth, why are these virtual villages populated with human NPCs? Why is Leo so incurious about this discrepancy? None of the characters are really asking enough questions, it's like the author is eager to write the MMO side of the story and was unprepared to describe the real-world premise and stakes. Once that MMO story develops, I think I might genuinely enjoy it, but every chapter before this one needs a solid rewrite.

Thank you for the chapter 🙂

Thanks for the chapter