Comments of chapter undefined of My Cursed Life in the Apocalypse
My Cursed Life in the Apocalypse
ItsHashi
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HeavenlyPigLv2HeavenlyPig
The grasp of English is superb, it's just that the author needs to make it more vivid. Explain their expression or their surroundings when they were moving, and also lower the difficulty of grammar since most of the readers can't understand complex English.
ItsHashiAuthorItsHashi
Ah, thank you so much for reading so far! Frankly, it is my first time writing a book from the third point of view, so adjusting to it has been kind of a difficult battle if I’m making it too simplistic or too complex. I hope it hasn’t been much difficulty reading it, and that with time, I will get better!
