Origin_Progenitor
Bro the story has been very good so far. The only thing is the solarin (The MC) should be given a more active role. For example, why don't you allow him to be a mysterious spectator who manipulates people both at the top and bottom of the world? A being that is simply laid back and above all.
Origin_Progenitor:Bro I also know this that's why in the second volume i am going to give him the active role, like the whole second volume will be from his point of view and in the second volume the story is going to be more about the plan of solarian.