Comments of chapter undefined of Naruto: Sukuna's Vessel

Too short ~

So far it's very good and interesting, but if you could give me a tip, I think the story is very fast Maybe it would be better if you detailed Naruto's thoughts and actions a little more too After all, suddenly they tell you that you acted really strange and you just forget, I think it would be worth taking some time to show how Naruto is adapting to this too.

Well, it's really not that bad. However, in the narrative, the hero describes himself too little. What does he feel when using the cursed energy? And the delight of incredible physical strength? Or how do Sukuna's skills manifest in him? He gets his memories, is it just a reflex or an instinct, how does it all feel? What does the hero think about the murders? How did he move so easily from thinking like a layman to a superman with incredible fighting skills and the ability to kill? Well, I mean, is it normal for him to wish others dead? Or is it more of a pretense?

tftc