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Comments of chapter undefined of System: Become More Than Human

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A very good start. Well done [img=recommend]

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Omny
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A well written first chapter, but I can’t help but see similarities with My Vampire System. Perhaps some inspiration came from that story? 👀 I’m looking forward to getting further with this book. Keep up the good work! 👍

Dottti
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See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola