Comments of chapter undefined of DXD: The Awakening Of Phenex

The new format is an abomination against English. LOL. I really dislike it when people start dropping the qoutation marks and start using colons like we are reading a transcript of a chat conversation. I understand its modern and still understandable but its a lazy method that goes against traditional literrary style and and just unprofessional overall.

the dialogue of previous chapters was much more fluid. this reads as a screenplay where the reader has to figure out the correct way of showing the (emotion). I like the story you have written.I hope my criticism is taken the way I meant it - constructively.

Not a fan of the new writing style. The readers aren’t stupid, we don’t need to be told the tone or emotion of the person speaking before they open their mouth.

I want to understand why does a pure devil like Hisoka has a sacred gear? It shouldn't be possible. Sacred gear are only for humans and reincarnated devil's and angles

Hum...

good chapter keep it up but the rias interaction with issei on the matter of riser it should be more strick i guess rias failed as a master also 😂🤣🤣😂😂😂

Pls, When possible, kill that idiot Issei immediately. Take boosted gear to the MC.

author which version of erza is this because current erza from 100 year quest can easily defeat sirzech

thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter more chapters pls

thanks for the chapter... good day to all who read

thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter 😇

So this is what you believe Issei is? And somehow, all the supernatural beings he would later interact with, don't see this? They're unaware that he's, as you're interpreting it, a selfish boy who can't put away grudges and only cares about his own ego?

seems like your style of writing changed. what happened?

thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter Pawn: Sophia Velmer

Thanks for the chapter.