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Comments of chapter undefined of Naruto: the forsaken

Dakota_Morrison
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Hiruzen already told them about him being the jinchuriki, so you kinda made a plot hole by acting like Itachi didn't know and ask a question that was already answered when he asked the first time.

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IceMonarch
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Hey author thanks for the chapters.. but please please please can upload future chapters faster.. I am so hooked on the story awaiting our mc to destroy the village...

Quake_Midaro
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I think O'm dropping this fic here between the MC's personality and the fact he's 8 and yet somehow llanning to steal a rinnegan amongst other poorly thought out plot points and the slow update schedule just lost all interest in this fic the idea is interesting the execution not so much

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carefreeshadow
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great story so far thanks for the update hope you have time and inspiration for another soon

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DaoistCkdsB0
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it's an interesting read, man. please don't ruin it by rushing faster uploads.

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Someone_Dead
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new chapter ? author

LeonardoDiCaprio1
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good chapter keep it up

Someone_Dead
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author next chapter please

Someone_Dead
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author next chapter please

Someone_Dead
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author next chapter please

Someone_Dead
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author next chapter please

Someone_Dead
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author next chapter please

Cindy_Davis_5782
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Realy good story

Hunter2k
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It feels like itachi is going to be like a Sasuke and madara mixture goal. 1) He wants revenge towards obito and the villagers 2) Make a world of eternal peace.

llaube
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thanks for the chapter

prophoc173
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thanks for the chapter

Hunter2k
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I kinda understand how the villagers have so rage because that night has taken a lot of people, and Shinobi lives who has family members. But sometimes I think the villagers are stupid because they believe a rumor without further investigation, but at the same time, there was lots of tension and losing faith towards konoha, which was a big thing. Even though it is frustrating but what I remembered is that jinchuriki had a lot of trouble controlling the power of their tailed beasts, which they lost control similar in kumogakure jinchuriki how the villagers look at him/her with some hate because how will they know the jinchuriki won't lost control and the tailed beast attacks the village.

Cody_Lee_Hoffman
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thanks for the chapter

Vidhan_Bhardwaj
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Hey you finally updated đŸ”„đŸ”„đŸ«‚đŸ«‚

MONARCHOFSTORMS
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TFTC I NEED MOAR