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Comments of chapter undefined of Marvel : Grey Matter as Illegitimate son of Tony Stark

Antonio_Araneda
Antonio_AranedaLv10Antonio_Araneda

En el capitulo 1 tenia fe pero leyendo esto solo pienso que fue una historia desperdiciada

YGboso
YGbosoLv1YGboso

he dislikes tony and gets treated like trash now he is talking to him after being kidnapped. please don't be a tony simp

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Zerox4575
Zerox4575Lv14Zerox4575

Start with the cyberpunk cars moved into bamax for companionship then go into hover toys so kids could get used to flying after that you can go into the flying restaurants and merge the think tanks and public labs so it all in one place

DuchessKolslaw
DuchessKolslawLv2DuchessKolslaw

I just can't sorry bud. The flow of the conversations are just to bad. I get English may not be your first language but it's to hard to read. I hope your skills in English writing gets better through this but it's to hard to deal with for me.

Warhammer100k
Warhammer100kLv1Warhammer100k

Gradually add everything

aproc_c
aproc_cLv1aproc_c

a 15-year-old guy appeared whom he sees for the first time and says that the earth will be destroyed in 2025 and Tony Stark: OK, I believe. You 're rushing things too fast . VERY quickly.

WolfLord
WolfLordLv14WolfLord

Thanks for the chapter on a good story.

Daoist866791
Daoist866791Lv2Daoist866791

thanks for the chapter