Comments of chapter undefined of Raiden's Storm (ASOIAF)
Raiden's Storm (ASOIAF)
SovereignOfHeaven
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I think it's amazing how he knows what happens when he drinks, but goes and keeps drinking, as if expecting a different result each time, for some reason I get the impression that Loras won't be reprimanded for allowing someone into the KING's room while he was almost unconscious and defenseless, without his permission.
I did not like this at first, but I understand were you're coming from. You can not have him lose in battle or in strategy, so to create tension you made him slip with cunning. I feel like a better man would simply not have fallen for it, but no one is perfect, I know I would have folded way before this. This makes it feel like the real Game of Thrones, where schemes are more dangerous than battle. Great chapter and I can't wait to see what happens next and how he gets out of this one. Does he kill her? Does he now make an official harem? Does he keep her as a secret lover? I'm exited for the future.
i hope that MC kills or atleats takes away the position of his dear friend Robert who even to a donkeys eye betrayed him into sleeping with Margerye he should also marry Loras Tyrell to a house that does absolute nothing to empower house Tyrell since he had a part in all of this and he is a kingsguard that betraid his king and separate Loras and Renly forever as punishment since it's obvious his uncle had a part in all of this aswell i think Loras deserves to die for this as a punishment to Renly and Margerye but banidhment sounds better since he obviously MC doesn't want to hurt to deeply both of them but atleast a total banishment is in order and make sure that MC punishes heavely house Tyrell with massive taxes less power over their land and make it official that Margerye's children with him won't be the succesor but of other women will, that will hurt more as a consequence. he- the King got played like a fool and he must do something about it as punishment because otherwise everyone has free reign to walk over him since he doesn't have a spine and can put the blame like a wimp on the alcohol, this is the 3rd time he gives shame now instead of beign funny and everyone knows it, just stroke his pride and ego and like a good dog he will respond and make sure that Margerye doesn't get to be the first wife, marry her ofcourse but not as a first wife and the Queen, that position to someone else like Daenerys. marry also Sansa and Arya since they deserve it especially now that is known that Arya is in love aswell but is just shy of admiting it or isn't sure herself. but MC did her dirty with this bs. not judging you the Author but judging the MC.
My problem with this fic is that the MC KNOWS he's terrible drunk yet he still drinks and he's not even addicted to alcohol, he gets peer pressured. What kind of proud king will allow themselves to get peer pressured into doing something that they're not fond of. The MC getting drunk is not a good plot device.
I understand drinking is his vice and its practically in his blood at this point to be a reckless drunk but you would imagine that for a man who advocates for improving day by day and his recent self-introspection he would stop drinking. You've used it 3-4 times so far and this point it's getting tiresome. You give him character development for his other flaws but choose to ignore one of his most glaring flaws (He himself has seen and felt the consequences of being drunk; ) so you can use it as a plot device.
