Comments of chapter undefined of Raiden's Storm (ASOIAF)

kinda annoyed that raiden killed his love and edric still loves raiden

it's getting annoying at this point ( he has Raiden Shogun with him and he is crying over some side chick that was just nice to him when he was child and never had that much contact with him after that, and not to ignore the fact that she is a commoner and he is the king it was never gone happened and not to tell you is it fair to raiden ? did she got any say but to stick to him it was his wish to have raiden with him not hers( not fan of harem)(but still can read it if development is reasonable )and please have some character development of Arya at this point there is more sansa in story then Arya her self**(((this not a hate comment just saying stuff it's yours story writer however you like but please do some character development of Arya(fan tomboys)),,, ))))**

Author wouldn't it be a Titan that shake the known world. Also you should start to make some improvments to life because he would need that. Also i would build from LOTR ehat dwars use against elf arrows and attach dragon glass to it

"The dragon that would shake the world..." Was a powerful line.

THANKS FOR THE CHAPTER!!!! I'm loving your story, it's the one I'm following most on got/asoiaf, keep up the good work.

tyfc

thanks

neat

Thanks for the chapther