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Comments of chapter undefined of I will now take your throne, dear father. (Mature version 18+)

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User_68934509
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I just found this novel and to be honest, I'm really excited to read more of this story. I'm going to post updates below this coment for the rest of you to help you decide if it's worthy.

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The pacing is so good. It's not rushed and thanks to short timeskips, the story walks around boring parts necessary for the believable plot. Example. He is holding her captive in his rooms, naturaly a few days is not enough to fill the time he needs to earn her trust, the one month timeskip makes perfect sense. We can see the character development, slow and steady. I feel hers is more visible thanks to the fact he is the one describing her as he is slowly getting to know her. The plot is good so far. The main lead is actually acting like an actual human being and not like a character written by a writer filled with naivity. Even when this fl is clearly the main love interest, she has an unique personality (you know, it's usually just a hole) which makes her more likeable.

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Lam1999
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Spoiler guys. This story is one of the best I have red so far in this platform. Time well spent [img=recommend]

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Zeera_Jay
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A nice start

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Ellie98
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Exciting plot, can’t wait for the 18 + scenes.