Comments of chapter undefined of HP: Loki The Guardian of Harry

There's a certain point where authors lose the plot. You want an edgy character who's a little too cool for school (quite literally) ? that's fine. But my man, this doesn't make him cool at all, he just looks like a small willy bully. This is like a fully grown man going out and punching puppies. It just does not make him look powerful messing around with children... Do better. Stop this degenerate behavior. Touch some grass Jesus. I've read better stories on wattpad and that's an insane thing to say so you know just where this story lands. I will pray for you.

Kind of a bit overkill to crush the hand of a 14 year old girl