Comments of chapter undefined of Light Between The Darkness

AlkiraPutera

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weeeboLv1weeebo

at the first chapter I was a bit confused his family said bro implying he is a male but the you wrote she which is implying she is a female

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AlkiraPuteraAuthorAlkiraPutera

Aku akan mencoba melihat dan memperbaikinya, terima kasih sudah berkomentar.

AlkiraPutera:Mungkin itu salahku yang salah mengetik

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Suep_AepLv1Suep_Aep

I like it

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VioGenKaiLv1VioGenKai

Interesting story, at the beginning of the story the way he **** is quite different from the novels I often read

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Mirage042Lv2Mirage042

nice progression so far but I think you might have made some tense error making it hard to understand something.

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NightGLE_WNLv3NightGLE_WN

love this chapter, gives me motherly love feeling

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Saepul_JamillahLv1Saepul_Jamillah

Owh, the end of the story is quite sad

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YouSafeMeLv1YouSafeMe

Train cho~ cho~ Quite a beginning story cho~ cho~

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Tres_AguilaLv13Tres_Aguila

Great start

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