Comments of chapter undefined of Is It Wrong to Try to Pick Up Girls in a Dungeon with Gate of Babylon?

Is It Wrong to Try to Pick Up Girls in a Dungeon with Gate of Babylon?

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z_renLv4z_ren

I don't like how the MC just accept it like it is natural, when it feel like he is just a spare or being disregard if he is not up to her expectation or standard, then she will throw away or abandon him in the end and the familia treated him as an object to obtain or posses and the very little bit of gratitude he feels for the Loki family is also being disregard, the thing is that when riveria recommend him to her goddess, she even fight in his place just to make him accepted by the familia, the act she did is remarkable, that is why he needs to find someone who will truly love him than just being treated as someone who will only choose him if they don't have someone to choose😔

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Noire_LiliumLv12Noire_Lilium

Thanks for the chapter.... tho i must say that these past 2-4 chapters feels like it was forced/ rushed, i dunno it might only be me but I've been getting that vibe...

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MacKenzie_50943Lv14MacKenzie_50943

thanks for the chapter 😊

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Ash_Ketchum_6164Lv14Ash_Ketchum_6164

Thank you for the chapter.

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LucikielLv4Lucikiel

Thanks for the chapter

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Crimson_KingLv6Crimson_King

Only thing I don’t like is the MC Which is horrible for a story considering it’s all based on the MC

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Maizuky_NichanLv13Maizuky_Nichan

Hum...

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Sabaroth_zarkielLv4Sabaroth_zarkiel

Thank you for the chapter

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Tetsuga03Lv4Tetsuga03

Thanks for the chapter!

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ABHISHEK_SINGH_6475Lv4ABHISHEK_SINGH_6475

Make Freya part of his harem

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Aster_EleftheriaLv13Aster_Eleftheria

Thanks for the chapter

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jcp1207Lv3jcp1207

Gracias por el capítulo

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Orion_RidgeLv1Orion_Ridge

Thanks for the chapter and your hard work!

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MaxnenLv1Maxnen

Thanks for the chapter

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wolfgod223Lv14wolfgod223

thx for the chapter😁👍🏻👍🏻

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INDRA32Lv5INDRA32

Thanks for the chapther

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AngelShadow2Lv2AngelShadow2

Thx for the chapter

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House_BreadLv4House_Bread

it's a small thing but I like that the "useless: gacha draws are actually something pretty valuable considering

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alef_RilzakiLv2alef_Rilzaki

It's incredible how American cuisine is rubbish, almost always in fanfic the food considered good is limited to hamburgers, fries and coca cola.

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MaradilueLv13Maradilue

👍

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