Demon_King22
I hate when the authors story jump you literally wrote nine chapters for this then hop to the next fic.
Demon_King22:Not really, since I said a new chapter is coming out this week or next week.
What's the point of rewriting this novel if ur not gonna update on a regular basis ? It been over a month already my guy ? Will either way I have a few things to point out 1. Don't make the mc a hero nor a villain 2. Have a huge harem 3. Find some kryptonite so he can grow resistance to it or immune 4. Make him train under the Hans of ( lady shiva + ravager + bronze tiger + Richard dragon) these people R the best when it comes down to h2h combat 5. Make him work more on his ( ki ) and have a better control on his emotions Don't make this just another boring dc fic by having the mc becoming a hero or a villain make him natural just have him training and gaining more combat experience by fighting in space against different aliens