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Comments of chapter undefined of One Piece: The Sinner

Alefe_Pascoa
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Namíbia na tribulação

Alefe_Pascoa
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Tripulação

LeonardoDiCaprio1
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Thanks for the chapter

Sabaroth_zarkiel
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Thank you for the chapter

Anitimesc
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Thanks for the chapter

Cody_Lee_Hoffman
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Thanks for the chapter

Lucifer_777
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Спасибо за главу

Void_Man24
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Thanks for the chapter! Just finish to read and get to this chapter just today. Ideas? I think I have few ideas for you: 1) Using one piece movies like film gold and none cannon movies to your plot, to even recuirt some none cannon people, If that's part of your direction in the story. 2) If the MC will stick with Nami, develop her much more, if they'll end up together, not rushing them, since it'll ruin the story. 3) Give Nami the thunder fruit. 4) Orginial characters to be added to the crew, with orginial backstories and so on. 5) Not recuirt any other straw hat future member, expect Nami if she join the MC, that will most likely happened in the end, but maybe to meet them in the future. 6) Get the MC devil fruit and developing the abilities with time, with how it's work. 7) Kill blackbeard and replacing him as new yonko, that'll be far more intersting. I Hope it'll help you in the future.