Comments of chapter undefined of Harry Potter: Journey to Godhood
Harry Potter: Journey to Godhood
bobthewriter
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It's starting to get exaggerated. Both in the number of chapters for a single inspection that has not passed 10 minutes and in the attack. In some later chapter he will complain that he let his emotions get the better of him and this had annoying consequences for him. The story is good, but it's starting to turn into Dragon ball. Remember? More than 50 episodes for 5 minutes countdown. Shorten the scenes. Or put it all in one or two chapters. Your creativity is great.
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