Comments of chapter undefined of The Villainess is my Love Interest
The Villainess is my Love Interest
Avidfan
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Bad_ThilionoLv15Bad_Thiliono
Pls let Lu qingyun have a different expression. A “bitter smile” is all he has shown. Maybe he’s a stroke victim or something but pls there are other ways to display emotions. Or just don’t tell me what his face looked like at all I’d prefer that over hearing he had a “bitter smile” one more time.
Bad_ThilionoLv15Bad_Thiliono
Whatever helps you sleep at night but it will help me keep reading if you “burden” me with some more emotion/expression I don’t mind a stroke victim as a main character but you should at least tell me. Also this is obviously sort of nitpicking and the rest of the writing is good so far I’m enjoying what you’re doing and will follow your story with interest ;)
Avidfan:This is done on purpose to use script language so as to remove chunks of expressions from the chapters as not to burden the chapter with too many expressions that can take too many lines.
