Comments of chapter undefined of Protagonist?Antagonist? I Reject Both

Dear Author, . honestly I didn't find anything to criticize in your novel till now and I don't know whether you would read this since no other comments on this chapter have been answered. Anyhow I really am a little disappointed in last two chs like I don't mind you extending an arc but I literally hate when some authors use lyrical or poetic English to unnecessarily create effects within a chapter especially when most of words used destroy mood and seriousness rather than amplify it simply because too many words are being used to describe small things like here half of such a long chapter in starting and previous chapter in ending covered only changes in their transformed appearances which was honestly a little annoying to read. Otherwise story was progressing really nicely before last chapter . My only advise and request is that use simple and normal English which you have been using till now and don't overdo in trying to create dramatic effects even though I can feel unnecessarily increasing arc length didn't seem to be your intention as you have never resorted to such means before. I hope I was clear in conveying my thoughts. Thanks

if u will take this much time for this enemy then what about future ones

man u took 8 chap lol

Thank you kindly for the chapter 😁

I suppose Leon have already became Martial Lord

Thanks for the chapter!

it was nice

tftc