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Comments of chapter undefined of One Piece: A Crimson Lion's Journey

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This chapter is very confusing. First, you say he has a ship made of Adam Wood and is using it but then you say he is using a submarine. Also the events in Fishman Island are totally wrong. The assassination happens a bit after the Celestial Dragon (CD) comes there. After the CD comes there, Otohime saves him and goes with him to get a petition for Fishmen to live above ground. And later, like at least a week or so, when they are getting the signatures for it, that's when Hody kills her. Also there is another confusing sentence in the chapter, where you say Ryga saw Hody in the Cafe and knocked out Hody and his goons with Conqueror's Haki but then you say Hody is going to kill Otohime. Please try to edit this chapter to make more sense.