Reyviel_Faesly
yeah I'm gone the whole hang up on his so-called maker is annoying I ain't even read the whole chapter as soon as I saw he's trying to make the world ready for her second coming if she returns I'm not dealing with that a whiny b***** MC and keep it it's too bad I was looking forward to the progression but I just can't take it
I wonder what period the story takes place in since even in the OG it was extremely rare, or impossible, to find wyverns in the wild outside of Valyria, and after their fall they basically became extinct đ¤đ¤đ¤ Will we have a visit to Valyria still alive? Honestly, it's something I'm excited to see, even more so because of the possible reactions they might have to his existence, his appearance, considering the entire Valyrian culture. :D I'm glad to see you back, please come back with another chapter real quick <3 Thx for chap
other thing I'd do is go on a planting spree with the norths weirwood trees and cackle while the south gets bent out of shape about it suppondly they are magical trees so they might bring back magic faster being the ice wall is sucking it all up. maybe even try and edit the weirwood trees to defend themselves from fanatics that will try and burn them, would be amusing to watch the idiots kill them selves out of stupidity
This is actually decent, but the one thing this fic is lacking is substance, it needs more actual writing instead of the whole âthis is what happened during this timeâ, it seems more like a diary than actual story progression. Once you get that part down then itâll start being good, so less of mc monologues and more telling through actions and dialogue. Keep it up đđ˝