La verdad no me molesta la.actitud del mc , (mucho hate al autor) lo que si, es que los capítulos son algo confusos, la manera de narrarlos es algo caotica
To summarize ... Realized he's in the Wizarding World...but all that he's focused on is....I get cheat ? Where's my cheat? Who is this? Merlin ! A 16 year old or 26 year old after time spent reincarnated ...but acts like a perpetual 5 year old who has ADHD.....
So lemme get this straight. He learns his technique from the pendant but merlin who is the maker/owner of said pendant doesn't know about it.
Plothole much?
Yes, I love the idea, but the way you represent magic is driving me crazy and not to mention the non-logical behavior of the protagonist, being a reincarnated person of approximately 16 years old plus the 11 who lived in the world of Harry Potter
He is supposedly just a magic memory, then it immediately switches to his POV, and says that their souls are bound. If he was just a magic memory, im pretty sure he wouldnt have his own POV, while also not having a soul