It has emotions...good
It has proper dialogue...good
It fails to create imagery of surroundings/atmosphere.
The story is well-paced, well-thought-out, and well planed. Eagerly waiting for next chapter.
finally free chapter finished i will leaving this fking novel where i didn't see getting sugar mommy at start even after 29 chap .fking scammer, burn her burn that dumb witch burn!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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