Odayaka
somehow its getting cliche ... like a protagonist with lowest talent, mystery of its mothers family and and i guess next will be his fathers history and mystery.... well from the name of the novel i suppose it will be something new but it seems like its usual.... :(
You wrote a flashback in a flashback. This is supposed to be Noah telling his body's mother about what happened to her actual son. For the sake of flow flashback inception is actually more detrimental than having a line where the elder simply says, "The last time someone said words like that about Long Tian's mother, that child killed the one who disrespected her without remorse.