Comments of chapter undefined of Game of Kings

The huge usage of profanity is not good.If you are seriously writing a fantasy novel be mature about it and use good vocabulary.The constant usage of profanity in every few lines decreases the quality of the work otherwise a great start .Also I need to know if it's going to be a democracy nobles bad novel cause I came here with the title expecting a proper aristocratic structure with monarchy.I have seen all the modern corrupt democracy or ccp for one lifetime in real life.So far in modern world the citizens of monarchies are thriving.