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Comments of chapter undefined of Harry Potter with Technology System

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Maktube
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Just a small reminder. This is not how an argument with an elderly person whould go ( I am refering to the wand argument obviously). You could have argued that Neville was not only his father's son, but also his mother's, therefore, the result of their love would be a colmination of both of them instead of only the father. Now, I am not saying my argument would work better than yours, just that it is one that it has less of a wiggle room for Augusta to argue. At the end of the day, this is your novel and you can and will do what you want. This is just a comment from a fan of you and your story, that believes, said comment could be a stronger argument. Thank you for your hard work. I hope to read more of it.

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Dical
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Thanks for the chapter

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AvidReader962
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Thanks for another entertaining chapter

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Hollow_Daoist
Hollow_DaoistLv4Hollow_Daoist

thanks for the chapters maybe tell about getting memories for them to watch jolt the mind awake then let it heal

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HardKiller07
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Thanks for the chapter

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Sommerscave
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I have really Liked that Harry Made Sure Neville gets a proper wand for himself especially because i am Sure He will keep His fathers wand should He Need a secondary one for His own protection which the wand of His father will surely be very Happy about. Thanks for the chapter.

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Tyrant_Wild_Snail
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Thanks for the chapter !

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Luke_Devilux
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thanks for the chapter 🐍

ggswart_510
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Hey I noticed you got sleeve and slave mix up I the 13 paragraph