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The Villain's Lament

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amanda_FerrisLv4amanda_Ferris

This was poorly written, very confusing. The chapters continued to introduce the main character. You are writing from John view ,then from Eleanor veiw

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Reveries_AuthorReveries_

I apologize for my poor writing. It was my first time writing a novel, so I wasn't sure how to introduce the characters. I appreciate your understanding.

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moon_light_02Lv3moon_light_02

I am still confused whether Meg is the traitor or not🤷‍♂️. By the way, Reveries_, are you alright? You haven't posted in two weeks and your last comment was long ago.

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