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Comments of chapter undefined of The Villain's Lament

Azure_Dragon720
Azure_Dragon720Lv4Azure_Dragon720

I feel like I’m reading an English essay from Oxford university 😭…..I just be skipping pages. Nice book tho but it’s a bit slow

Reveries_
Reveries_AuthorReveries_

😂😂 😂😂😂😂 , i know but it my first novel and i don't know how to fix this novel.it too loonggggg

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ALMA_ISAO
ALMA_ISAOLv3ALMA_ISAO

but the story is slow facing bit nonetheless its good story

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ALMA_ISAO
ALMA_ISAOLv3ALMA_ISAO

there is a repetition of chapter

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May_monte
May_monteLv15May_monte

a coward