Comments of chapter undefined of Ben 10: WTF?
Ben 10: WTF?
THEARACHNID
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Doesn't MC have Plot Knowledge of Ben 10?Please NO,I hate Amnesic MC's. Also,Please add -Ben 10(Classic) -Ben 10(Alien Force) -Ben 10(Ultimate Alien) -Ben 10(Omniverse) -Ben 10(Reboot) -Ben 10 Race Against Time -Ben 10 Destroy All Aliens -Ben 10 Alien Swarm -Ben 10/Generator Rex:Heroes United -Ben 10 Ultimate Alien Cosmic Destruction(Only "Potis Altiare")
I want to clarify some things that caused your confusion. Arthur, the MC of this novel has no such things as morals, that's why he is OK with killing. As you'll find out what happened to him, I hope you'll understand why he doesn't care about anything. He also doesn't care about his own life, but that's for now. He'll soon start appreciating things. Please don't take any offence from the chapters seriously. That is just how Arthur's brain operates. I apologise for forgetting that the recalibrated Omnitrix gives the user information about how each alien's powers work. I appreciate your help with this detail. I'll fix this later on. About the time period of the fic: I started with the alien force because I didn't enjoy the original series as much as I enjoyed the"Alien Force". With utmost respect, thank you for the comment.
Hasan_Shopnil:By Amnesia,I meant to say that MC is without Plot Knowledge,That's so Uncool and feels like MC is going Blind. Also MC uses Swear Words/Curse too Much as Well as Too Violent,Emo and Aggressive and He also Kills,That's a No go for me. Also You straight out Start at Ben 10 Alien Force,That's Not Cool,You should Start with(Ben 10 Classic,Ben 10 Omniverse Past Flashbacks,Ben 10 Race Aginst Time,Ben 10 Destroy All Aliens,Ben 10 Reboot;then Ben 10 Alien Force,Ben 10/Generator Rex:Heroes United,Ben 10 Alien Swarm,Ben 10 Ultimate Alien,Ben 10 Ultimate Alien Cosmic Destruction,Lastly Ben 10 Omniverse). MC also tells Gwen about his reincarnation and Gwen doesn't react Much and takes everything as Normal(That's Not Correct). Also,You should Know that Recalibrated Omnitrix(From Alien Force and Ultimatrix,Even Omniverse Omnitrix)has Alien Ability Information saved in their DNA(Only Classic Prototype Omnitrix doesn't have Alien Ability saved in their DNA),Meaning in Alien Force whichever Alien Ben transforms into can already know What abilities they have and they also always announce their Alien Nickname after Transforming. Lastly in your Fic's Cover Page Photo/Pic/Image MC looks like Classic Ben(10 Yrs Old,even in Getup/Style) but your Starting in Alien Force(Teen Ben) which doesn't Suit/Match MC's Profile and Physique. [*I know I've Complained a lot,SORRY,But I just wanted to let you know my Opinions after reading the few Chapters you released,I mean If your gonna write a fic then Write It Seriously&Properly and from the Start/Beginning(Ben 10 Classic) and Also Improve MC's Character I mean MC should Understand Killing should be the last resort and he should avoid It as long as It’s Not absolutely Necessary,There are Other Measures(Null Void,High-Tech+Magic Prison,Power Nullifier Handcuffs etc.),I mean Original Series ran for a while and there's a reason It’s so Famous even though Original Ben is an Idiot,Never Trains,Never Utilizes and Never takes Advantage of Other High-tech Sci-Fi Technologies from his Universe before Ben 10000 Timelines*]