luminous1_vanqu10
Seems like a manchild that let the power and position get to his head also horrible decision to kill loki hes one of the best characters in the mcu and you also claimed our mc got the original thors emotions so he wouldnt have been able to do that
just think the mc has a little personality similar to Homelander.he has problems and he is strong.and can grow stronger in the future
Ichigo_Kurosaki_1799:I dont really do reviews only comments i think ive only ever done a single review its also pretty wierd that your asking for a negative review so im guessing sarcasm or you plan on your mc being shown the error of his ways and have a change of heart...
yh, he shouldn't have killed loki. Just kill Laufey and make Loki king of jottunheim. More soldiers, fewer headaches đ©. Also, pass a breeding law for the asgardians. There's barely a million of them make them a trillion. if less than a million could conquer 9 realms, including musphelheim and svartalheim, then a billion can do more. Also, he looks like a mindless villain with this approach. He should've just mobilised his soldiers and spaceships and made it seem extraterrestrial and announced his presence through the Internet, claiming sovereign of the Nine realms and that. But overall, the best thor fic I've seen yet.